Monday, December 1, 2008

(ups And Downs Collection) Time Is The Master Comments

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Time trickles through us,
through and through us...

born and reborn, I am borne
...
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Janice Windle
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James Roberts 05 December 2008

Time trickles through us or do trical trough time afine metaphysical poem thanks for brightening up my friday afternoon jim

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Onelia Avelar 03 December 2008

I like very much the first stanza, read it again and again, it is very good ballanced, philosophic and emotional: ...born and reborn, I am borne on the bloodrush of fear, flowing of sweat, upwards, up the tall, winding, tilting staircase of years....Time is the master. An epic poem, though in a tempered manner, without to be pathetic.

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