(ups And Downs Collection) .... Giving Up Comments

A poem in two parts Janice - pain, certainly, but no regrets! You manage to capture a sense of solitary introspection but counterpoint it with exuberance in spirit and rythmn. Rgds, Ivan

Eloquent, honest lines that harness such resiliance - an impressive poem janice. J x

This strikes painfully, and exquisitely, close to home. That very first line expresses truth in a nutshell; the determined attitude of the end has your reader entranced and impressed. t x

Lovely write here, Janice..thanks for sharing!

This one strikes so close to home that I feel it was written by me! Excellent, as all your poetry is, Jan. Love, Fran xx