Thursday, January 15, 2009

Uprooting My Heart. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The garden surrounding my soul, being long
Under control, bore no visible weeds.
Every bed seemed tended, all plants belonged
To a known pattern of life, no wild seeds
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Fay Slimm
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Scott Austin 27 January 2009

This is a very touching piece which gives one the feeling of being reborn again with love and tenderness. May you blossom and bloom into the flower for which you are. Scott

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Kris Smith 16 January 2009

This is a lovely piece of gardening Fay could say blooming lovely 10 ++++ Chris

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Lynda Robson 16 January 2009

I like this a lot Fay, cleverly written, you being a plant that needs tending and then able to bloom again, lovely Lynda xxx

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Tia Maria 16 January 2009

Dear Fay.... you landscape the garden of love so well.... thanks so much for your inspiration and your perfect poetry, T 10 10 10 again

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Colton Foltz 15 January 2009

Started out pretty sad at the start. Good job

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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