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The ocean ends here,
but feels strongly otherwise.
Across cliffs stacked sternly
against her violent intentions
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A marvelous fascinating poem, excellent poem creation. Top marks Seamus!
A solid poem, each line steeped in great imagery experienced around each coast of Ireland.
Such beautiful thoughts, so beautifully described! .. A very awe inspiring poem! ... Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++
the bubbling sand whispers a warning- - -not to mistake this momentary truce- - -for welcome- -nor forget the sea never surrenders. - - -> the literary lion roars his closing in magnificent Seamus style! ! ! 10 million stars and onto my fav list!
but the moist sand beneath my toes may have once been a mountain or the keep of a mighty fortress.- - -I want to write magic lines like these! ! ! !
The second stanza continues the promise of the dazzling first stanza.! The cliffs are unperturbed by the sea's frenzy at their ankles! ! You are awesome! ! ! Loving this incredible write! !
Oh My Gosh- -that first stanza is immortal Seamus! Strong, novel, brilliant with imagery, thunders like the ocean! We need you to lead the way into better workmanship! To be continued!
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7/27/2025 9:34:37 PM # 1.0.0
Your last/ concluding line sums up everything, the sea never surrenders...Full Stars