Upon The Lap Of Nature Comments

again a wonderful poem that brings out essence of beauty and love.thanx for sharing. voted10 surya

in very simple words you very vividly showed the unity in nature that sustains life...

sometimes we don't appreciate nature enough....thank you for reminding us.....!

The title is enchanting as is your poem. We are all living things and we are part of nature too, though each part of nature has a it's own aspect to work within a certain structure. So many people do not realize this and are cruel do not appreciate nature I think. You are a great philosopher and your poem is written in a format so easy to comprehend with a great flow. Top marks!

nature is the good teacher without money and jealous teach us the facts....your bringing down and its profoundness are remarkable.................

lovely capture of the singularity of nature...bird to the star and seasons....lovely

The purport under the poem explains the contents of the poem very well. When a man integrates himself with the nature, then the nature, in its turn, takes care of him life long. His heart beats well then, he behaves well, he speaks well, he writes well and becomes a loveable personality in the society like the pleasing nature. Ravi belongs to this type of a man, I feel, from the way he writes his every poem.

Captures aspects of nature like the spokes of a wheel

Ravi, I enjoyed this poem so much...nature pictured so eloquently by your pen regards Alf

Different wonderful views of nature.

Awesome composition shared with a fabulous theme and great metaphors!