Tuesday, June 14, 2011

Upon The Arid Lakes Comments

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Someplace
A field of flowers
Rousing under remnants of the dawn:
Out there! from death, I rose
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Mark R Slaughter
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Joseph Sanchez 28 April 2014

But as a cloud of thought, I mused, Exacerbating woes Collected in a life dispatched In freely flowing blood, Conferring crimson shades Upon the arid lakes aflood With glorious tides of nascent buds Begetting innocence.

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Finra Fung 06 May 2012

would you be able to break it down to simpler English please? I really want to know the meaning of it! ! :) Thanks in advance~!

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Devin Staszkiewicz 28 June 2011

a very dark reality well said two thumbs

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Mark R Slaughter

Mark R Slaughter

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