Thursday, February 15, 2007

Upon Reflection Comments

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feeble you lay in one place
frailty is written on your face
hurt is prevalent everywhere
i just don't know how i should care
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michael brown
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Jonzo Bandwagoner 21 February 2007

I echo Ms. Linger's comment. So simplistic, yet you communicate the emotion perfectly. Keep up the great work Brown.

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Rosa Linger 15 February 2007

hmm...very thoughtful and poignant

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