Saturday, August 13, 2016

Upon My Shoulders Comments

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The weight of responsibility
Lies heavily upon my shoulders
Trying to collapse my world
By bringing it crashing down
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Sakib Choudhury
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Rose Kanana 14 August 2016

Sometimes we''ve got to bear the burden that is not of our own making...Good message there Chakra.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 August 2016

For I have become like the titan Atlas Forced to bear the skies on his shoulders For as long as eternity may last Beautiful stanza in this poem. Lovely one, thanks for the sharing.10 for it. Subhas

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