Thursday, June 25, 2009

Upon Another Time. Comments

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Yet another day to fill, she turned away,
Her sigh dare not be heard. It was Maytime
And she was needed at the special play
Which village lads and lasses would be miming.
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Fay Slimm
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Bob Gibson 27 June 2009

That first love, when we give our all no holding back our feelings, sometimes we take a fall the emptiness inside you is with you night and day when your parted from your loved one, life seems dull and grey a very touching portrayal of young love Fay

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 June 2009

Wonderful poem...

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Smiley Hooker 25 June 2009

This is a very emotionally provocative write, Dear Fay. Well penned!

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Susan Jarvis 25 June 2009

This poem is filmic - some fantastic images here, Fay. A romantic epic at the sweep of a poet's pen - bodice-ripping stuff! ! S ;)

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Fay Slimm

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