Upon A Winter's Day Comments
So cold upon a winter's day
In icy winds the trees would sway
And all around the snow there lay -
So cold upon a winter's day
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A very skilled piece, enjoy the brief time the season is with us.
The winter can be beautiful... and cruel... so similar to love... very nice poem, , , Terry
Perfect rhyme scheme. I feel the rhythm as I read. So lovely and pure, and yet so sad. I thoroughly enjoyed. Well done Val.
A very beautiful poem with such ease and flow, rhythmic and musical! ! This deserves full 10 Have a Merry Christmas and a wonderful New Year, Valerie! !
A magnificent write about the winter and the snow: ! Brings the very nature close to our heart. For one who has not experienced the snow the portrayal is very vivid. I loved it. The poem in itself sounds very musical. Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year.!
Snow makes even the roughest landscape look flawless for a while, then it's just a load of dirty slush! Illusory layers to this poem! Love it!
O why then did you say goodbye ….. An amazin' poem! ! ! Top marksss Happy X mas! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
A piece wherein lines of apt words are wedded to season and thoughts alike...
O why, when did this love die. an enjoyable read and excellent write
how beautiful description...each word tells a new story of a winter...bravo mam thank you for sharing love payal
Very Beautiful Valerie, love the rhyming. I can only imagine as have not seen snow, so thank you for putting me in the picture. You make it so real.
May the rain soon vanish from your world Val, enchanting poem with such a heartfelt ending.
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7/29/2025 5:30:39 AM # 1.0.0
Such a beautiful peace of work, I love the snow thanks