Upon A Star ……. [dating Memory; 60 Percent True; Medium; Personal] Comments

Wonderful, evocative write Bri with your great sense of fun the poem is so relatable for lots of men!

A very interesting and touching story. First time with a girl in a car. Cool movie, Elvis, rain, kisses. Everything went so well. The lights switched off. Your “thing… had grown by half”... You got to come over and push down on the girl’s pelvis. The B(a) udweiser turned out the Goodweiser.

Oh really? ......so Bri had a first kiss also? ........I think you deceived the girl, whom I believe was your junior by then, with your poetic words...ha! ...... This is a great effort, interesting flashback!