Wednesday, April 23, 2008

Upland Walkway Comments

Rating: 4.0

Walking along the walkway
The valleys, slopes, -scapes walk along
Green swarded like a vast emerald
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Indira Renganathan
fog
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Edward Kofi Louis 20 November 2016

Through the fog! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kesav Easwaran 28 August 2008

A poetic picture of a love scene...the bluish sky kissing greensward...breeze is the contact and kiss, drizzles...’doused in loving silence’ is a wonderful phrase, bringing out the after effect sensation of such a kiss...and in the end, curtain fog drawn down, the poem keeps the love scene off your vision...trapped there not to leave! 10

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