Wednesday, October 23, 2013

Update Of Sonnet 129 Comments

Rating: 4.8

The foul destroyer of love is deceit.
The lies, the hides, the smiles that break the trust
All founded on that despicable conceit
That treachery is but natrual lust.
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Martin McLean
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Clarence Prince 16 November 2013

Everyman knows what he is risking Yet few can resist the thrill of taking. So very true! Well done, Martin!

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Karen Sinclair 23 October 2013

I tried commenting before but have issues here when using iPhone. I love how it flows off the tongue so poetically when read aloud. This has a humbleness in its honesty. Thank you for sharing. Karen :)

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Karen Sinclair 23 October 2013

Powerful and almost humble in its honesty This has brilliant flow and falls off the tongue poetically. as I read aloud it made me feel all poetic. Thank you karen

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