Saturday, September 29, 2012

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Rating: 5.0

I have feelings in my head and heart
They contradict each other pull me further apart
Trying to work out what they mean
They wont stop conniving they wont convene
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Craig Anderson 30 September 2012

Excellent! Regards Craig

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Romeo Della Valle 30 September 2012

Excellent! A thought provoking reservoir of powerful words and rich imagery in this write that clearly shows your great poetic talent! I love its rhyming pattern! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

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