Tuesday, October 8, 2013

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What finally you’ll gain at last –
By snatching and depriving all others!
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Amitava Sur
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Akhtar Jawad 17 October 2014

Every body at the end of the game Is finally in the quest of peace A great write, loved reading it.

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Roseann Shawiak 02 April 2014

Doing the wrong things might get you more in the beginning, but in the end you lose yourself having done harm to others. Even if you haven't enough in life, at least you can go to sleep and rest peacefully, knowing you have done no wrong. A choice everyone must make in life personal gain or peace of soul, filled with serenity? Great poem, Amitava, so true. RoseAnn

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Noreen Carden 05 January 2014

A great write with a very clear message about doing the right thing in life.Great read well done Amitava

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Hazel Durham 01 January 2014

A great message in this powerful poem of staying on the right road to find peace and happiness!

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Patricia Grantham 09 October 2013

A very good write indeed Amitava. ill gotten gains do not last too long. They take wings and quickly fly away. A poor mans hard work pays off in that it allows him to have a good nights sleep while on the other hand a rich mans wealth does not allow him the luxury of a good nights sleep. Do unto others as you would them do unto you. A great write.

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Valsa George 08 October 2013

If our conscience is pure and if we never strive to gain anything through unlawful means, even if we are half fed- the soul will be in peace- and we can have a sound sleep! Peace and happiness are the greatest possessions man can ever come to possess! An enjoyable read with a great message! !

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