Friday, June 28, 2019

Up On The Wings Of Storms Comments

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Slumped idle scarce we sit, nor breathe easy,
On kissing coasts, content never we coo,
Nor crow, we struggled in a stormy sea,
Soon as we shed sour sweat, go for goals new.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Indira Renganathan 02 July 2019

'Strange joys O jostle us wrapt in a storm.'...awesome...lovely each line...it is true that we all do enjoy storm though we know it is scary and destructive...interesting poem

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 July 2019

I appreciate your feedback Indiraji.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 June 2019

A well crafted inspiring poem, sir Aniruddha...10+++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 June 2019

Thank you Rev Bernard for the feedback, as generous as your heart is.

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