Sunday, February 3, 2008

Unwise Decision Comments

Rating: 5.0

Loving you and leaving me seemd to
go hand and hand

Decisions made with anger filled
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Bonnie Collins
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James B. Earley 05 July 2008

A passionate writ of unresolved conflict. The song has ended but the melody lingers. No winners..........losers only......even freedom has its ache!

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Subbaraman N V 05 March 2008

The moving finger writes and having writ moves on.............!

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Emancipation Planz 03 February 2008

What a heart wrenching rendition of choices that end in broken up lived through stanzas...

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Craig Anderson 03 February 2008

So sad, yet so beautiful. Consider my heart tugged at for sure. 'Loving you took out part of my organ Transplanting it now, would only be one more unwise decision.'.......................Excellent. Thank you for sharing. Craig

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Bonnie Collins

Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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