Saturday, January 9, 2016

Unwinding Love Comments

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Along the dark shore where the waves roll wild
And the wind roams where it will,
The soul fills with flaming passion
While the stars stand shocked and still.
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Edward Kofi Louis 23 May 2016

Two imprisoned souls! ! Nice work.

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Poppy Miller 23 May 2016

Ah, yes Edward, but what a way to be imprisoned.

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Tom Billsborough 25 March 2016

This is one of your best poems. The last line is particularly good. Tom Billsborough

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Poppy Miller 26 March 2016

Thanks Tom for reading this poem.

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Poppy Miller 26 March 2016

Thankyou for reading this Tom

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Poppy Miller 23 May 2016

Thanks Tom. I aim to please.

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Terry Dawson 16 January 2016

Well twined the strong forces Of wild nature And consuming passion! Well done!

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Poppy Miller 26 March 2016

Thankyou Terry, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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