Monday, September 11, 2017

Unwind The Clock Comments

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The time is running out
Our cups are almost empty
We had our joys and our moments here
Soon it will be time for goodbye
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Nudershada Cabanes
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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 December 2022

Great piece! You are quite matured with profound knowledge on modern poetry. I love your poetry.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 May 2018

Our cups are almost empty! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 April 2018

The time is running out Our cups are almost empty We had our joys and our moments here Soon it will be time for goodbye We shall set sail to our own seas And land on different shores........nice beginning with haunting and insightful expression. A beautiful philosophical poem on time and parting has been duly presented. Thanks.10

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Nudershada Cabanes

Nudershada Cabanes

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