Tuesday, October 13, 2009

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How old are you?
How long have you been on this earth I asked
as I squished you between my thumb and forefinger...?
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Shirley Hanley
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Kesav Easwaran 14 October 2009

the unwanted intruders...everywhere from nowhere! nice narration Shirley...ants at times are a disturbing lot...inside house inside mind! thanks i liked...a ten for this write

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Tom J. Mariani 13 October 2009

I have never found so much humor about ants since my mother told me when I couldn't sit still, that I must have 'ants in my pants.' I think she sparked my interst in poetry / in 1953.

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