Friday, February 17, 2006

Unwelcome Journey Comments

Rating: 5.0

You’re driving home to New Jersey
With a heart full of fear and sadness.
A year ago, your father drove to see you,
His old eyes still bright with vibrant life;
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Uriah Hamilton
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Ivy Christou 23 February 2006

especially the ending is touching.. gracefully touching! very well done! HBH

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Shannon Chapel 20 February 2006

Simply lovely. Shannon xoxo

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Sandra Fowler 17 February 2006

Heart to heart and soul to soul. Just to be there for a friend is a gift in itself. a very moving poem... Kindest regards, Sandra

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A. B. 17 February 2006

As usual, a beautiful poem by Uriah. Loved it. Peace.

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