Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Unwelcome Guests Comments

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Come September, these creatures arrive;
To keep them out, we desperately strive,
But, despite our efforts to keep them at bay,
In to our lives they still seem to stray.
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Angela Wybrow
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Leloudia Migdali 01 October 2015

Nice poem! I liked the way flyers are revealed in the end! In the beginning one might not think of them. Nice dual meaning!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 16 September 2015

These flimsy flyers still haven’t learnt That if they’re not careful they will get burnt. Truly, I think even man like these creatures do the same thing Loved reading th poem A lovely poem on the creatures that disturb our life at night And also a message for the humans Added to my poem list ................................10

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Angela Wybrow

Angela Wybrow

Salisbury, Wilts, UK
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