Unwavering Strive Comments

depression and recovery...your first and last stanzas are lovely...lc

Such great flow through this poem. Beautifully written :)

really good picture on... dust and dew not my favorite of yours but well done... seems like one written in one shot.... by impulse (good thing)

Very nice, I like the flow of this poem. It was well thought and written.

... agony of losing the paradise...

yes we all have to take those pains so that we may grow. well written.