Sunday, September 2, 2012

Unwavering Grace, Portrait Poems Comments

Rating: 3.1

I coaxed the bird with a slight nip of rum
daylight was broken, the moon rejects sun.
I told him to sing a song of the sea
as he used his beak to straddle my knee.
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Captain Cur
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Ray Quesada 12 October 2012

You have great style, using so many poetic techniques, and with such ease! ! wonderful job! !

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Joseph Anderson 05 September 2012

To sail as in the days of yore is my never to be realized wish. You make it so appealing Wish I could join you.A 10 for these exciting trips

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