Unwanted Weeds Poem by Rini Shibu

Unwanted Weeds

Rating: 5.0


The unwanted weed that grow
in the garden, watches your way
It curls and lurk behind the pine trees
But you always pluck and clear them away

Just like the true and unditachable love
They love to grow among your dreams
Creep and spread in your lawn
And love live close to your streams

Sunday, October 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,weed
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2017

A beautiful metaphorical poem on love compared with weed has been depicted here hauntingly. Thank you dear Rini for posting this lovely poem here.10

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Robert Murray Smith 08 May 2018

A poem intertwined with nature and love is so appealing.+++10 Robert

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Cheryl Tutaan 03 November 2017

Such a beautiful mess of gorgeous chaos...thank you for sharing, Rini...another 10! ♡ Cheryl

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Rini Shibu 03 November 2017

Thanks Cheryl for reading this poem.. Rini

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Daniel Brick 30 October 2017

This is not only beautifully expressed in lush language, it has the beauty of truth, the simple truth that love means paying attention to the beloved, being patient, not passing judgment. Your image of the weed which is really a lovely but unappreciated flower is very eloquent. Your second stanza is marvelous: we are surrounded by unrecognized beauty just poised for us to SEE IT. And then it won't be a field of weeds; it will be a garden of flowers.

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Rini Shibu 30 October 2017

Thanks Daniel for reviewing this poem..

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 October 2017

Unwanted weeds - is a beautiful poem that speaks the truth of life. The good is always accompanied by the bad. We have to remove the bad. That's the role of man! There is a beautiful parable in St Luke that speaks of a Landlord who grows wheat, but finds weeds growing between the wheat. The landlord plucks them in bundles and burns them away. Dear Rini, Your poems of love are both frank, intense and philosophical. A full vote

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Rini Shibu 25 October 2017

Thank you so much Geetha, your words are encouraging

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 October 2017

They love to grow among your dreams! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 23 October 2017

Thanks Edward for reading and commenting

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