Unwanted Love Comments

Hi Yulissa Angel - This is a lovely Poem about the angst of First love & Young Love. Our parents always have high ideals for us especially for our daughters and we want them to bein love with and marry what to us is the perefct man - we don't see them through our daughters eyes. V 1 'Our love is Puer & Sweet (great - that's how young love should be) but UNWANTED (sad that our Family etc will not accept that we are really really in love) . The Lady in the peom knows this love is real 'The world fades - we float ina cloudy blue sky' We acn all remeber that feeling - it's awesome. When we are young we do 'fall in love at first sight and firts touch'. I like the resolve (despite disaproval for Family! ! !) 'No matter what - True Love..........We still stand strong. Love poem in its structure - rhythm and content. It deserves a TEN. Love you in poetry - JOHN.