Sunday, April 30, 2006

Unwanted Fixation, Utter Lamentation Comments

Rating: 0.0

I still remember,
That sweet November,
The taste of your lips,
No-one can eclipse,
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
Goldy Locks 30 April 2006

excellent rhythm & flow. a bit cliche at certain lines 'even if you were fake, for you i ache, ' however very good cadence. best care, susan jane

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success