Tuesday, June 30, 2009

Unwanted Doll Comments

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A girl looks in the mirror
And says to herself
'I'm like an unwanted
Doll on the shelf'
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Ariana Love
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Silence Dogood 30 June 2009

This is surprising coming from you Your poems have matured and developed better flow and more meaning

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I think the real problem occurs when too many people interfere with others' life creating the unhealthy competition...cheating... Nicely penned...thank you for sharing...

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