Thursday, December 12, 2013

Unwanted Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I'm all alone, when no one is around;
I let the feelings out, I let the tears fall down.
No one sees these tears, no one sees my sadness;
No one sees the blood drip down, or feels my inner madness.
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Lily Ashwood
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Khairul Ahsan 12 December 2013

I have been quite impressed and touched by your poem 'Unwanted'. This is replete with emotions of a teen aged girl who feels neglected by her father. I give it 10/10.

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