Friday, August 22, 2008

Unwanted Comments

Rating: 4.8

Life is gone
Thoughts were never my own
I asked for little happiness
Though it fell into darkness
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Asif Baloch
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Maryam Khan 14 December 2008

He who has created me Ah! He has also forgotten about me I’m for sure he never even wanted me That’s why he sent me this is not so, every one wants you just you have to look around and then see what is your importance. and if He dont want you then why you have to return back to Him? think upon it asif n then tell me. rgrds maryam

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Reshma Ramesh 05 November 2008

oh! ! that aint true.....iam sure u were loved all the way......well written

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 October 2008

I always enjoy the taste of your belief in your poem like this one. Lovely truth is expressed. 10+

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