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This poem is great! I love the opening line! It also shows that you care for your friends, to have heartache to see them in vain.
something everyone with a broken heart longing for nicely written ~Bella
i like this poem im feelin' it, keep writing i enjoy reading stuff like this
I like this poem you wrote. I know how what you wrote feels. But you wrote this very well :)
i like this one allot and love is nothing nice but trying to love is hard to do when the other person does not seam to care about you
Most people have no clue what true pain feels like. They say they do, but they more than likely don't. They don't know that true pain comes from loss and broken hearts. Your poems prove that only a few people, including you, know what true pain feels like. I love your poems. Don't stop writing.