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before my visions nice lyric poem 10/10

a passionated write..warm as usual

this is well written..single powerful words means a lot.....has an authority to define the thought itself..very smart..BISMILLAH...

well penned with deep emotions

I walked a journey, on a barren road of life, and smokes became still, before my eyes, Very lovely and melodic poem..gave rise to the existential reality of being alone on the road of life.