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Frightening sound on tree form owl, ..............from owl? Never to loose hope I made doubly assure...............: lose, not loose AND i would use doubly sure not assure for TWO reasons: 1. i believe sure is correct; it is what i, a longtime native-speaker of english would use rather than assure 2. to me it is bad enough to rhyme sure with assure, but it is worse to rhyme assure with assure. it is 'nice' that you write in english and the hindi-speaking readers may love your stuff, but i'm afraid it is not for me. thanks for sharing. bri :)

Excellent poem well penned.10.

I learned a lot from setback or failure, Met with defeat where success was sure, How I take it coming and others assure, Never to loose hope I made doubly assure ----- wow! ! ! fantastic and kind poetic advice...well done finale with meaningful theme! ! ! 10+++