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king, i just read this.. and i like it VERY much. i also like the notes you wrote; they help me know you and your poem. i don't understand all of it............some of that may be because we live in different countries and have different native languages. at least i suppose english is Not your first language. but you did a great job keeping me fastened to the poem anyway. (see next line) i hope laughter and eating and drinking (well, maybe a LITTLE sadness) is there after i die also. i especially liked the parts: I rear my lips for the moonlight........................kisses. and flow with the most flawless twinkles that winks at joy i'll add your poem to my mypoemlist. thanks for sharing. also thanks for your comment on my poem about a lonely cloud. bri

thanks Shivani for feeling my feels.

Feeling sorry for your brother.. But really a nice write.. Well done..

Thanks Ketan. That's life; we come we go! But wat matters the most is; what did we leav behind? And how shiny is it? Thanks for feeling my pains! I really loved him like mad.

Really, I felt feelings in it. I m sorry about your bro

@ Yoonoos Peerbocus, I purposely used; I am happier than death, and not depth, because,1: Us and death, come handy, it is either death or life, der is no middle life or middle death.2: Poetic licence.

It''s a somewhat dark poem. If you didn't write the notes it would be difficult for me to understand it. Anyway I like it. Keep on writing