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nice poem... greatly done.. strong dark emotions... but focus on positive things ok? ? =)

If this were a dramatic monologue presented to a large audience, I believe you'd get a standing ovation. A great write..I think this one would become famous someday..thinking and dancing with the shadows, confusion and darkness..read the poem and you'll have nothing more to say. I look forward to more of your poems. -grins-

A true contemplation seems to have been disturbed by some distressing act that has covered the senses with pelts of fear...........

Nice flow well writen

nicely done.. but please don't stress your self too much..