Thursday, August 30, 2012

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Human dreams,
like the stars
in a dark sky,
hang there burning...
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Smoky Hoss
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Dave Walker 06 September 2012

A great poem, to live a better life we sometimes need to fail, we can then learn by our mistakes.

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Joseph Anderson 02 September 2012

Ah- sweet mystery of life, I've never solved it.Guess what we don't know will never hurt. A deep probe What else can we do? A very thought provoking write. It made me realize that we aren't ever alone.- we have each others

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Valerie Dohren 02 September 2012

Perhaps our purpose in life is to reach perfection through a great learning process, through which we make many mistakes, but learn through those mistakes. Good one! smoky.

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