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Beautiful write painted with different colors. Loved reading it.

honest to God, Rachel you are indeed a good poet and this poem is very poignant and thought provoking.

A thought provoking poem

Beautiful imagery Rachel, packed with wisdom and thought provoking!

learnings as only lovers have power and skill too. Mellifluous waters cascading, intoxicated, we drink each others, Swell.

It reminds me of'1957'..

like this one quite a lot... love the way it ends!

An excellent poem, , very meaningful! ! ! Good flow of lines! ! phenomenal write! ! !

A flowing piece.

Intellectually written poem Rachel! Thanks for sharing such lovely work!

Awesome poem, with remarkable wisdom.

nice poem... and of course the title of the poem takes it to the new dimensions! ! ! !

Like this good poem. Good write.