Saturday, September 23, 2006

Untouchable Beauty Comments

Rating: 5.0

So far away, yet so close,
I can almost hear you breathing.
With your hand curled in mine,
I'd cuddle you forever.
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Jibin Joseph 05 February 2007

a beautiful poem And the twilit sparkle in your eyes, i enjoyed this line in particular thanks for sharing peace jibin

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Brian Dorn 18 November 2006

Truely a beautiful write suggestive of its title. Well done! Brian

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Melvina Germain 30 October 2006

Beautiful and sweet, I like the simplicity of this wonderful poem-Melvina-

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Preeti - is here! 26 September 2006

And keep it tucked away, its your private life, its too beautiful to be shared. This one was simple and beautiful! Preets

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