Untouchable Comments

I laughed at 'But this time I ask everyone - 'can you make me drown even more? ? ? ' ' [silently laughed] Excellent! ! ! bri : )

(CONT.) This poem is soulfully-sensual. I hope you got at least ONE GOOD kiss (a 'real one') before yout 'broke up' aka ended the relationship! ! !

Though I've commented in the past, I NOW send this to 'my favourites' and give it ***** five stars. (CONT.)

An ecstasy and a fear was there, I was tickled and thrilled at a same time. Looked at him and thought He looks like my next mistake. I was hiding my body and he took my soul. Can you make me drown even more...........love, dreams, romance, intensity. passion....... fine poem. tony

Original, deep and heartbreaking as you feel untouchable after been hurt once before but with mesmerising lines and they are actually brilliant lines you fall in love again to be left hurt once more. This poem is going on my favourite poem list and thank you for inviting me to read this superb write!

Original, fresh and heartbreaking with mesmerising lines, actually brilliant lines

Well this is a remarkable poem! A good effort.

(cont.) bri :) p.s. on second thought, leave the poem as i read it (or not; it is up to you, OF COURSE) . it will sound more exotic, like a foreigner wrote it. well, that word, foreigner, depends on who is talking about whom! p.p.s. i have/had ways to get through gaps! !

(cont.) and another favorite: An ecstasy and a fear was there THIS made me laugh (out loud) : and thought He looks like my next mistake. and THEN you have four very fine lines: I was hiding......I was gone. wonderful! i MEAN your writing. (cont.)

“ …Cover every inch of gap …”.. “Covered” favorite line so far: A whisper underneath my ear hit on a strong door of my defense. [[ your PH photo makes me think of seeing a very young and shapely Bollywood movie starlet sitting as a guest on a TV 'talk show'. ]] (cont.)

A good start with a nice poem, Ruchi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

Wow dear poet, what a lovely and sensational poem. Would love to quote these lines of yours dear Ruchi.. A whisper underneath my ear hit on a strong door of my defense. I was untouchable behind the doors but still felt touched by him. Not my body but he touched my soul like no one else. An ecstasy and a fear was there, I was tickled and thrilled at a same time. 10+++ for the sharing. Subhas