Tuesday, June 2, 2009

Untold Story Comments

Rating: 5.0

Come with me
I show you thee
the shadow beneath
the candle dance
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Asif Baloch
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Obed Souza 31 July 2009

It´s the cry of the lonely heart... I´ve learn to lean on the heart of silence, and I´ve learned a lot from it...

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Anjali Sinha 03 June 2009

loneliness is curse and I'm cursed by fate you will come to know for sure, when all prayers and pleads will be turned down from heaven's gate hey asif no loneliness arnt we all there with you then why that loneliness wowwwwww the pathos of that loneliness nicely brought out in this poem a tenner from meeeeeee anjuuuuu

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Shashendra Amalshan 02 June 2009

'loneliness is curse and I'm cursed by fate you will come to know for sure, when all prayers and pleads will be turned down from heaven's gate' dear Asif...this is a very moving touching one indeed//felt every line...I was chastised with the same curse the day i came to the site...if you read my poem 'The Mesmerizing Chainsaw'....you will understand the pain i was in the day i came to the site....but the site can heal to a certain extent.....but i know i will never feel same....thanks for sharing your feelings with me.... wish you every happiness//cheers for the happiness of both of us, , , ... poignant one

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Lady Grace 02 June 2009

'loneliness is curse and I'm cursed by fate' this poem is really beautiful..the way of presentation is different.it is unique and expressive..grace

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Ashraful Musaddeq 02 June 2009

'breeze is blowing cold still colder is my inner side I give light and heat to world, but beneath my feet is cold and shivering night' Don't feel alone, we are with you man. You have nicely composed this touching piece. 10+++

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