Friday, May 8, 2009

Untold Stories Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm here again within my dream
amongst the stars aglow,
I search for you among the clusters
Hoping, a sign you'll show.
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Tracey TEE
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Christine Kerr 13 June 2009

Very intersting story from the other side. Your guides are there to give you strength and you explained this so well. Nice one Tracy 10++

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Shashendra Amalshan 02 June 2009

'I feared time would take you away but once again I'm told to look into tomorrow and follow the starlit road The road your heart belongs to is how you'll find your star' I wish I can find some fallen star at least someday...and i can feel your emotions running through these lines.....and that makes this a touching, moving poem...nice one ma'am...liked it..and felt it too..10++++++ With love and hugs Shan.

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Kesav Easwaran 22 May 2009

Love lines emotive...softly sad yet so loving...beautiful imageries, Tracy...touches the bottom of reader heart for sure...10

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Carl Harris 16 May 2009

This is an absolutely gorgeous poem, Tracy, full of love, passion, and some very outstandingly beautiful writing! Your words seem to soar in this vivid and exceptional poem, so filled with wonderful imagery in each verse. You have told this touching tale as well as it could have possibly been told! Carl.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 15 May 2009

Trust your feelings trust your soul and love will always be yours to hold.....................SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL, love betides by trust of feeling, wonderfully honest and passionate,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 May 2009

'Trust your feelings trust your soul and love will always be yours to hold. Very nice and lovely poem.10++

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 09 May 2009

very expressive and flowing! like Puccini Opera on words!

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Emily Oldham 09 May 2009

wow, that's amazing. Full of beautiful phrases and passionate. Thanks, Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Fiona Davidson 08 May 2009

This is so beautiful Tracy...rich in imagery and full of feeling...Fi 10+++

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