Untold Accounts Of Time Comments

...." As Iceberg melts and breaks Into the expanse of the ocean" . What a sparkling imagery and comparison! The iceberg of pain, the major portion of which is hidden breaks and melts into the ocean of pain. Great poetic expression.....10

Depicting the brokenness......significant......thank u....anjandev roy.

Very nice, Arzoo! My poems have finally been activated. Poem Hunter made me wait eight days to activate the first ones!

It is difficult to fathom the depth of your feelings when you take into account the falling stars, tears rolling down the cheeks and the melting icebergs in an effort to find the meaning of nothingness and " the brokenness.... Of my barren desolate life" . An amazing piece of poetry.

They are pearls of your life, someday someone will find it lying in the depth of the ocean of the love. Fantastic poem on pains.