Fredoneth Jonelas

Fredoneth Jonelas

Centro Poblacion, Culasi,5708 Antique, Philippines
Monday, September 24, 2012

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Walking alone in the middle of the darkness night,
Where did I go if no one is in my sight.?
Lonely night scares my path through light.
Light which I seeks in my whole life.
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Fredoneth Jonelas
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Kelvin Owusu 28 September 2012

another great piece, enjoyable read, this is nicely structured

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Erika Wingo 28 September 2012

I find this to be so true in life. Some of the many struggles that we all face at one time or another. Very relatable and very nicely written.

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Darkangel Flyfree 28 September 2012

I like this one, there are always some who can bring us down and then there are the one's who can always bring us back up again! Excellent poem!

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Fredoneth Jonelas 28 September 2012

I am just a student sir. Thanks for the compliments

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Allemagne Roßmann 28 September 2012

Superb write and very well penned Sir

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Fredoneth Jonelas 25 September 2012

This is one of my projects before.. now I am compiling this through PoemHunter because I might lose this someday.. thank you for the like...

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Indranil Bhaduri 24 September 2012

Wonderful.. we get confused choosing our paths as we walk through the streets of life.Very well expressed.

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Fredoneth Jonelas

Fredoneth Jonelas

Centro Poblacion, Culasi,5708 Antique, Philippines
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