Monday, April 6, 2015

Untitled To Be Comments

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A painter may I be, I’ll understand,
“You cannot be a painter if you cannot paint”
Therefore, without arms, I’ll keep my dreams in a vision and I’ll stare on that tabula rasa
I’ll sketch with the point of my view, and when my tears fall down, they will spread like a blanket of Astra
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Fabrizio Frosini 16 April 2015

interesting poem, written by such a young poet. It shows your poetic qualities and I've really enjoyed it. But.. maybe.. its title should be ''Untitled To Be'', not simply 'untitled'.. ;) Thanks for sharing, Tiffany

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Kelly Kurt 06 April 2015

Lovely poem, Tiffany. Thanks for sharing Peace

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 06 April 2015

I say an extraordinary poem with inspiring messages, written in great rhyming lines in many places. Found this epic interesting and unique. Pls do review my latest poem too titled mother natures. ....

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