Monday, July 30, 2007

(untitled) From 'six Places' Comments

Rating: 2.7

your presence was like the sky,
delicate in its intent and tenuously present
or like a shadow that followed me everywhere,
discomforting in reproach noticing fixedly my faults,
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Alexis Pena Goco
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Dipy Hermonite 13 September 2007

I loved the depth. Wonderful piece.

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Swaroopa Rani 12 September 2007

Well-written, I found a deep feel as well as great hope in your poem. Swaroopa

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