Wednesday, September 18, 2013

Untitled, But Entitled..... Comments

Rating: 5.0

He loves dark chocolates, old fashion penny candies
and horses....
And I wish he loved me....
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Susan Lacovara
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Edward Kofi Louis 25 May 2016

I must surfice to be content! ! Facing the ways of love and life. Thanks for sharing.

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Anthony Burkett 03 February 2014

so wonderfully written... expresses a most delicious desire... softly... as it is meant to be... and should be...

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Danny Draper 28 October 2013

I have a coat I rarely wear, it never gets too cold around here, but when I do it snuggles embracing me in in genuine welcoming warmth and that is enough. This fine write to me is about that coat and acceptance of enough when opportunity arises. Enjoy your coat and its warmth as chance permits.

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Khairul Ahsan 22 September 2013

An excellent poem with an eye catching title and a good explanatory note. The impressions have been so neatly drawn that everybody can see a clear picture. 'He drifts in and out of his own sentence, Leaving lines, canyons wide, to read between.' So wonderfully expressed! 10/10.

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Dislocated Heart 18 September 2013

Every word conveyed through this poem is lovely. Enjoyed the read! Thanks for sharing.

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Susan Lacovara

Susan Lacovara

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