Thursday, September 29, 2011

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Morbid letters bleed their
way out of his pen.
No one knows she's watching.
He sighs and contemplates
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Cody Smith
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wow! this poem was well written, i could picture every word i every libe in my mind. i like the images and the rythem that flows through this poem. i also like the well story type telling of it. i no some people in my life that do that type of stuff and have. you could take this poem in many different ways. especialy asbout the drink and the death that it bring as well as the girl wil fa; llow him quickly. there are many interpretations of this poem and all are bad things but wonderful everytime. if that makes any sence. i enjoyed this poem. it can mean so many things. and it does not matter how someone interprets the poem it will touch them in one way or another. well done, i have given your poem a 10

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Cody Smith

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