Sunday, May 15, 2011

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Rating: 5.0

Dying in pain feel through my vein
Doubts and fears start to reign
Happy and hurting memories still remain
This silly fate makes me insane
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 May 2011

Nice rythmic flow. Awesome work. Great imagery with nice style. Great write indeed. I rate it 10. TFS. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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