Sunday, November 22, 2009

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My skin is becoming cold and damp
A painful pulse in my eyes is
Bouncing off the inside of the back of my skull
And all voices echo
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Tony B.B.
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Penney Cooper 22 November 2009

this is really good too tony, yet from what i have read from you i believe you can make it better and tell more of the story. as a reader i want more! !

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