Thursday, September 17, 2009

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Rating: 4.5

I walk down this dark, moonlit road alone.
Feeling like a hollow, empty corpse.
My heart heavy with grief and sorrow.
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Ellen Kang
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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 January 2016

Wonderfully penned poem. It's title may have been A Stroll Under The Spell Of Death.Thanks for sharing.10+ points.

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Rakesh Bedi 18 September 2009

A nice and interesting narrative, ellen......... seems a perfect thought if put under the title of....hallucination......

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Jean Dament 17 September 2009

That is quite a story told in this creative poem with it's great imagery. I would title this 'Shadow of Death.' Ravensong

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